Post by lukefonfabre388 on Jul 1, 2020 8:15:18 GMT
I started writing fan fiction about tales of the abyss which seems like I started a while ago. I created this character in my mind called Luna Fon Fabre. She is Luke's height, has black hair in twin tails, is a gifted swordsmen, has a caring, loving, romantic, friendly, well mannered, personality and Loves Luke and would never want to do anything to hurt him physically or emotionally. They travel together across the land and are always near each other and never away from each other. Luke and Luna get along incredibly well and never argue with each other over anything and they are just absolutely inseparable. They quickly learn to trust each other
and can depend on each other for support.
Don't worry neither of them will die because that's a stupid idea.
Luke and Luna are not bad people at all they are very good people but have had a run in with an gang after taking a wrong turn in a town they were in. They were outnumbered but still kicked the gang's ass. They didn't mess with them after that. I was on the fence about making Luke and Luna dismember the enemy gang members with their swords but opted not too as I thought it might be too violent. They have fought monsters before and there was some blood and violence there.
Honestly I think Luna could be a real character in the actual tales of the abyss game. I already think she is way better then tear grants Luke's real love interest and even better than Natalia although I still like Natalia. Luke and Luna got a pretty good amount of money from killing a monster. It dropped like 50k gald and they have been living off of that ever since.
Luke and Luna are going to live in the forest together with a house they buy with there own money. I thought about making them bounty hunters where their targets are either bad people like bandits, gangs, or monsters. That's how they get there money to afford the house they want. Not sure If I want to go that route or not. People might be looking for revenge after a specific bounty is capture dead or alive. There is quick money in bounties but you can rapidly make a name for yourself which is not always a good thing. Bounty hunting is a dangerous, dirty business.
Luna's backstory starts with her having an argument with her parents and after disagreeing with them she wanders off into the world. The only thing she really brings with her are her sword, her backpack, water, food, and a few survival items. Luna grew up in a village that is hidden from the rest of the world for the most part. She learned how to fly a flying machine just like the albiore when she was living which is what it's called in the game although I wanted to come up with a different name for it but haven't thought of anything yet. Suggestions?
Luna learned how to use her sword from a gifted swordsmen who taught her everything she knows. She learned how to fly while growing up in the village and is an ace pilot with years of flying experience. When she set out toward the real world she doesn't really know where to go and just kind of wanders from place to place. Eventually one fateful night she meets Luke who has also been on his own after leaving his group of former friends. Luke even says he is not sure they were really his friends or not only traveling with them because he is in the outside world now. After defeating a monster near them they decide to travel together seeing as how they started out in pretty much the same situation as each other. Luna is also a gifted seventh fonest but has never really used it in battle yet.
Luke in this story has become incredibly skilled with a sword. Luke was taught by master van and he eventually rivals or even surpasses his master. He is a more powerful character and is a better swordsmen then Asch Fon Fabre. Luke does not suffer from having the possibility of disappearing. Luke is confident, powerful, has a better understanding of the world and is like Luna in so many ways. The two of them are pretty much made for each other.
I decided that I would put in a sex scene between Luke and Luna. It took some thinking before I did that as I thought about it long and hard before I decided to do it.
However I have started using up a lot of my ideas that I came up with in my head. I'm at 53 pages right now with over 31k words. I'm just honestly not that great of a writer. I pretty much won't end this story probably ever. I did come up with one idea where I have Luke and Luna traveling across the world together when a time machine fly's over their heads and lands perfectly intact and set to a very specific date that can't be changed. Not sure what to do Luke eventually reaches out and presses a button on the machine and Luke and Luna are whisked back in time to what appears to be an ice age but big things like dinosaurs still exist. Luke and Luna come across a group of people fighting a battle with there mortal enemies and aren't doing so good against them. The elder of the group asks them for help fighting them and Luke and Luna agree to help fight the groups enemies. The elder also says they were the ones who sent out a time machine hoping it would reach somebody that could help them out and Luckily Luke and Luna responded to the call.
Dinosaurs though live in peace with the elders army and assist them whenever possible. However the elders army is outnumbered and outgunned and they begin fighting a war they can't win. That's why they asked for help from somebody out there in a different time period hoping somebody would come to there aid. The elders army wishes to live in peace with their dinosaur allies but there enemies won't allow that. The enemies army wants the land the elders army has an is willing to take it by force if they have too. Eventually negotiations break down and a war breaks out between the two armies. How Luke and Luna will fight these new enemies is still being thought out. Luke and Luna do have there stuff they brought with them from the future including there swords too.
Another possible addition to the story which is completely unrelated to the one listed above is Luke and Luna attempt to bake a cake for Luna's birthday. It doesn't go as planned. Still a work in progress.
Another idea I thought of is on Luke's birthday Luna agrees to dress up as a maid for Luke because that is one of Luke's fantasies about Luna. Not sure how that is going to go yet.
Also thinking about making Luna an unarmed combatant if she is forced to do that since Luna has had training in hand to hand combat. However Luke has not had hand to hand combat training so Luna will teach him.
and can depend on each other for support.
Don't worry neither of them will die because that's a stupid idea.
Luke and Luna are not bad people at all they are very good people but have had a run in with an gang after taking a wrong turn in a town they were in. They were outnumbered but still kicked the gang's ass. They didn't mess with them after that. I was on the fence about making Luke and Luna dismember the enemy gang members with their swords but opted not too as I thought it might be too violent. They have fought monsters before and there was some blood and violence there.
Honestly I think Luna could be a real character in the actual tales of the abyss game. I already think she is way better then tear grants Luke's real love interest and even better than Natalia although I still like Natalia. Luke and Luna got a pretty good amount of money from killing a monster. It dropped like 50k gald and they have been living off of that ever since.
Luke and Luna are going to live in the forest together with a house they buy with there own money. I thought about making them bounty hunters where their targets are either bad people like bandits, gangs, or monsters. That's how they get there money to afford the house they want. Not sure If I want to go that route or not. People might be looking for revenge after a specific bounty is capture dead or alive. There is quick money in bounties but you can rapidly make a name for yourself which is not always a good thing. Bounty hunting is a dangerous, dirty business.
Luna's backstory starts with her having an argument with her parents and after disagreeing with them she wanders off into the world. The only thing she really brings with her are her sword, her backpack, water, food, and a few survival items. Luna grew up in a village that is hidden from the rest of the world for the most part. She learned how to fly a flying machine just like the albiore when she was living which is what it's called in the game although I wanted to come up with a different name for it but haven't thought of anything yet. Suggestions?
Luna learned how to use her sword from a gifted swordsmen who taught her everything she knows. She learned how to fly while growing up in the village and is an ace pilot with years of flying experience. When she set out toward the real world she doesn't really know where to go and just kind of wanders from place to place. Eventually one fateful night she meets Luke who has also been on his own after leaving his group of former friends. Luke even says he is not sure they were really his friends or not only traveling with them because he is in the outside world now. After defeating a monster near them they decide to travel together seeing as how they started out in pretty much the same situation as each other. Luna is also a gifted seventh fonest but has never really used it in battle yet.
Luke in this story has become incredibly skilled with a sword. Luke was taught by master van and he eventually rivals or even surpasses his master. He is a more powerful character and is a better swordsmen then Asch Fon Fabre. Luke does not suffer from having the possibility of disappearing. Luke is confident, powerful, has a better understanding of the world and is like Luna in so many ways. The two of them are pretty much made for each other.
I decided that I would put in a sex scene between Luke and Luna. It took some thinking before I did that as I thought about it long and hard before I decided to do it.
However I have started using up a lot of my ideas that I came up with in my head. I'm at 53 pages right now with over 31k words. I'm just honestly not that great of a writer. I pretty much won't end this story probably ever. I did come up with one idea where I have Luke and Luna traveling across the world together when a time machine fly's over their heads and lands perfectly intact and set to a very specific date that can't be changed. Not sure what to do Luke eventually reaches out and presses a button on the machine and Luke and Luna are whisked back in time to what appears to be an ice age but big things like dinosaurs still exist. Luke and Luna come across a group of people fighting a battle with there mortal enemies and aren't doing so good against them. The elder of the group asks them for help fighting them and Luke and Luna agree to help fight the groups enemies. The elder also says they were the ones who sent out a time machine hoping it would reach somebody that could help them out and Luckily Luke and Luna responded to the call.
Dinosaurs though live in peace with the elders army and assist them whenever possible. However the elders army is outnumbered and outgunned and they begin fighting a war they can't win. That's why they asked for help from somebody out there in a different time period hoping somebody would come to there aid. The elders army wishes to live in peace with their dinosaur allies but there enemies won't allow that. The enemies army wants the land the elders army has an is willing to take it by force if they have too. Eventually negotiations break down and a war breaks out between the two armies. How Luke and Luna will fight these new enemies is still being thought out. Luke and Luna do have there stuff they brought with them from the future including there swords too.
Another possible addition to the story which is completely unrelated to the one listed above is Luke and Luna attempt to bake a cake for Luna's birthday. It doesn't go as planned. Still a work in progress.
Another idea I thought of is on Luke's birthday Luna agrees to dress up as a maid for Luke because that is one of Luke's fantasies about Luna. Not sure how that is going to go yet.
Also thinking about making Luna an unarmed combatant if she is forced to do that since Luna has had training in hand to hand combat. However Luke has not had hand to hand combat training so Luna will teach him.
